Lalli+Brandon+wk+13

====** My presentation responses (write what you liked about the presentation and why and give at least one suggestion for how the creator can revise his/her Prezi. Write ~50wrds per presenter) **====

** April 25th Wed. **
==== ** Taylor, Justin A- ** I liked how his topic was the telling of how there is two sides to every coin. The before, the cause and the after effect was a nice way to tell the story for t he project. The way people view things is the way they wish to view them, there is no evil only different ideas. It seemed incomplete would be the only thing I would say to fix, the last picture. ==== ==== ** Wang, Nicole- ** The part were the child was running from the monster was a nice sequence of events. I really liked the way she talked about the shard of illusion. The example of when the person woke up was good. She talked about the fighter jet, i do not think many people know what one looks like adding a picture may help with the story. ==== ==== ** Tarby, Brandon-  **I liked how the story came full circle. The way the time skip was presented just did not feel right. It seemed to interrupt the flow of pictures. The many quotes from the bible was a interesting way to show that the kid made up his mind and headed home. ==== ====**Charles, Amanda E- The use of** Ramage was a nice touch. The way she came across the ready made ideas helped to enforce her message. V ery well done with right pictures to help get her argument across. She has organized the Prezi itself very well and there is a clear presence that she understands the readings in this class and has used them well. Some pictures can be seen in the frames of others, that is the only downside i could see.==== ==== ** Ward, Rachael M- T ** he text was small at times and hard to read. People that may not have played Mass Effect may have had trouble understanding the message. The way she made her project a cycle was a nice touch how life will always continue, with or without you. The importance of being remembered. It what makes you immortal. (you can't go wrong with ME3)  ==== ==== ** Frey, Jason C- ** The way it was present just should out as a commercial you would see on the television. The way you talk about over weight people and how this "drug" works was a good eye catcher. The "you dont have to work but you will still get something" is a nice way to talk about the drug. I may have missed the argument presented here, i didn't quite get it. ==== ==== ** Allebach, Jessica R-  **  The definition of what a treasure is stated as was a really good use of text in the project. The message was clear, "enjoy every day". How she talked about her own personal day was a good way to connect the story with her and the audience. If that could somehow be placed into the slides it may make the report even better. ====