Lalli+Brandon+wk+14


 * May 02 Wed. **
 * **Howe, Amber L - The question what is true love is a good one. Is it family or is it your first crush. Your imagery is well done, the flow of the story is very smooth. The editing is a bit choppy but other than that i found no real flaws. How you see yourself is important, that i think is the best message in your prezi.**
 * ** Brown, Deanna M -The second slide when you stated "and lord knows everyone is an expert" made me laugh and caught my attention. The way your path moved was a bit too zig zag for me, not saying it doesnt work it was just not appealing to me. I did like the experience over reading. You dont really know something untill you do it. **
 * ** Shapiro, Kelsey A- Branding the people to what type of music they listen to. The question about do we use music or does it use us was one that made me think about a response.How music can act it is just not there it is acting for us. Not just listening but associating. Went a bit fast with the slides but very well done. **
 * ** Mascaro, Jenny D - The story of hope and how it shattered the dreams of all on board the titanic. Text is small to read at times. I really liked the story of how you followed one woman's life on the titanic. How she lost everything and everyone. If you zoomed in on the newspaper it may have helped the story, i tried to read parts of it. **
 * ** Reidler, Estelle L - I liked the opening quote from Freud. The thought that we create illusions to mask reality. When you were talking about the dream within a dream and using the text within the pictures to help with this message was a neat touch. Story was very well made. At times hard to see the pictures. **
 * ** Moyer, Charlotte A - Hard to see some text some pictures seem out of place, what is with the snake? The palish stones. It was a good story of the writing prosses. All done in a loop, the Mt metphor was a good way to convey the image and thought.I feel like some of the pictures are out of place, you needed to tell us what you ment by this. They couldnt stand on their own. **