Charles,+A+Wk+13

VSP Revision Notes: There were a number of things from the VSP reflections that I have or would like to put into my Prezi. For example, at Dr. Archibald’s recommendation I labeled the readymades that I chose. I used the titles of ‘The Drunk’, ‘The Quick Fix’, and ‘The Energy Addict’. I also did a few grammatical fixes and rearranging sentences that people thought didn’t make sense. I also changed my Prezi by not making all readymades seem like a bad idea. I realized that, and others mentioned, that some of the positive suggestions I gave at the end were readymades too. So I changed my overall idea to be more focused on considering that the benefits are of given readymades. I also changed the text/ picture interactions. I didn’t have a consistent patter for what order I put the pictures or words that were relating to them in. So I tried to do that more and I would like to take another try and make it as seamless as possible. I tried to cut down some of the words too. I tried to limit how often I was throwing them in there as well. I also changed some of my main points. For instance, one of my reviews commented on how I said that ‘you can’t buy happiness’. They mentioned that some people might argue that and say that buying the beers and whatnot does make them happy. So I want to turn it more into a question of true happiness instead of buying distractions. I also want to change some more of the technical details. I edited it several times to change the direction/ path of it so that it wouldn’t be too much to follow. Someone also mentioned that in a lot of the shots you could see the pictures on the edges of the screen and that was distracting. So I did my best to fix that. One more thing I’d like to do is to play around with the shapes and other things I could add in Prezi to edit the pictures to enhance the meanings.

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